Every week Ermiliablog host a photograph suggested by contributors and urge people to join in, comment with their paragraph of fiction to accompany the image. And every time I’ve written it so happened to turn into a fictional story. But for some reason this pic glared at me differently.
Maimed by our own inadequacies in life, we see the world through a chandelier. It is almost pertinent for our existence to be able to see the glitz and shimmer reflected back upon us. Just as an assurance that everything is the way it should be. Sheer perfection. Like a Picasso painting on a canvas, hanging on the wall. Often times, leads us to live in a make-belief world.
There is a lot of pain in the world. Just because we tend to look the other way, doesn’t mean its non-existence. The truth is sometimes we are so blinded by our pseudo living, we fail to see the stark reality. They say we are defined by our actions. By our choices. By our words. By our thoughts. And yet we speak with such callousness. We act full of animosity and malice. We behave unceremoniously. We commit heinous crimes.
And we judge. Yes, we judge without knowing.
I wrote these few lines from the point of view of a rape victim. The aftermath of a rape. The thoughts that run into a vulnerable mind when she hears stories of how she must have instigated it. How she is silenced to not speak about it to protect herself. It’s a women’s prerogative to walk freely just like a man and yet she can’t. It saddens me that already a rape victim has been through so much and still doesn’t end and comes along the mudslinging and fingers pointing towards her direction for being not civilized enough or not dressed properly or behaved inappropriately which led to her being raped. Such a morbid world.
I may have done no justice to her voice but I hope and pray that we see a new dawn soon when they’d be given the respect they deserve and not be defined by something that wasn’t their fault.
Break-free!
I was naked
Pleading for mercy
I was tamed
It was brutal
I lost myself
He regaled himself
But that doesn’t define me
Or confine my soul
I was untainted
And will always be
It wasn’t my fault
Still suffering is mine
What can I explain to the world
What’s taken from me
You don’t care much
I don’t tell to relive
I exist
Entangled in the web of lies
They say it’s the right thing
To hide my emotions
To mask my being
Prove to me
Yet again
There’s a world
That looks out for me
Ask me
My choice
All I want
Is to
Break free
Sadly true.
Indeed. Very very true. Thanks for reading.
True words. Well written.
Yes, the sad reality of the world we live in. Thanks for reading.
very moving.. very sad. and very very real.
It’s a very harsh reality for those women who go through this.. I can’t even fathom so just tried to portray what I could. Thanks for reading, Kz.
Wow! well written…
Just one of those topics that makes me stop and think. The cruel world we live in. Thanks for reading.
Superb – the poem and introduction i two parts before. Really quality stuff. Vital topic.
It indeed is a topic of prime importance. Hopefully, some day things will be different for these pure hearts. Thanks for reading.
Good job! Very appropriate ending words. The self-incrimination and the frustration at not being able to make it go away continue long afterward. The words “I don’t tell to relive” really hit home.
Always appreciate your valuable comment, Anne. You know I can’t even fathom what they go through. It’s just that every time I read about such horrific crimes, it makes me retch. And the tragedy is the never ending interrogations that go on with them afterwards. As if it isn’t enough what they’ve been through that they keep harassing them more.
I wish you well, Anne. Thanks for reading.
I could write at length about the interrogations that come from myself. I’m tired of it. Your compassion is what is important! ♥ Just keep writing!
God bless you, Anne. Sending some smiles your way.
God blesses everyone in kind. You blessed me this day.
He sure does! And I shall now keep you in my thoughts always so you have only blessed days.. :-)
Not sure how that’s gonna work, but thanks! ♥
Very powerful writing and superb character voice. Tragic that this is a reflection of the world we live in.
It is sad indeed. I guess we can only hope and pray that such a horrific act is completely erased off.. Thanks for reading and the photo that took me in this direction.
Ooooh, well written… Very powerful…!
Thanks for reading.
strong words..sad reality..
It sure is a bitter reality. Truly sad that in this century it still exists. Thanks for reading.
you touched every sentiment Muzer! very deeply thought and written
Thanks. Soumya. I wasn’t even sure if I hit the right sentiment.
you have!
:-)
Tragically true, heart breaking & powerful! I really wish you (/we) never had to write on something like this…
Yea.. So true.. Hopefully there’ll be a day when this shall not exist at all and we can only pray that is sooner than later!