The word prompt for this week’s Trifecta Challenge is:
3: something that is extremely difficult, objectionable, or unpleasant
Please remember:
- Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
- You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
- The word itself needs to be included in your response.
- You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
- Only one entry per writer.
- Trifecta is open to everyone. Please join us.
Here’s mine:
Six Months!
(175 words)
It’s been exactly 6 months since I last did it which is startling considering the frequency being almost daily earlier. I’ve been happily married for 3 years with little to no room for regrets. In fact, we welcomed a baby in our lives 6 months back. Possibly the reason it got pushed further down in the list of priorities.
Or maybe it’s the exhaustion. Free time, if any, equates to idling on the couch bingeing while him staring at me. Although he’s quiet I can sense him saying “Why not now? You disappoint me.”
So in a spur of a moment I decide to shake things up a little. I quickly freshen up, turn the music on to set the mood and walk straight on to him.
The first 2 minutes feel like eternity.
Awkward.
My heart’s beating faster and my legs totally jammed.
“#$%^#&*@&#.” I groan barely 15 minutes on him. My elliptical.
It’s going to be a bitch to get back in form, I realize. After all six months is a long time.
The flash fiction with that prompt did justice , that’s what I think
By the way, if you can please read /review my short story Final Destination
Thanks so much. Glad you think so. I’ll drop by your space and read it.
Thanks muZer for the word!
Nicely done. Very real!
Thank you.
Excellent muZer!
Thanks, M. :-)
Those ellipticals are hard work….!
I enjoyed the suggestion of a possible love encounter setting the pace…! :)
Well done… ;)
They sure are and especially after a long break.. Am glad you noticed that (love encounter suggestion).. It’s no where even close to the Pilates post I read :D Thanks for reading.
Hahaha…. :)
Oh SoTrue
Thanks for agreeing.. :-)
Ha!ha!Naughty ideas kept floating in my mind,accompanied with steamy visuals-well,it did get steamy but not how I was thinking;-)Crafty use of the prompt-loved it Muzer
Hehe.. You really got naughty.. I don’t know what you were thinking hehe.. ;) Thanks for reading. Glad I could make you laugh.. :-)
Ha!ha!I found it very delectable;-)
:D
I love a good twist.
Thank you. Happy to hear that.
Oh, you had me fooled!
Hehe. Glad I could. Thanks for reading! :-)
Like it ! nice punch at the end .
Thanks. Glad you liked it. :-)
Nicely done, great punch line
Thanks for reading.
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Turned the tables on us. Made me smile. Nicely done.
Thanks. Happy to hear that. :-)
I know. Get my mind out of the gutter! great job.
Hehe.. Thanks for reading.
Ha! I was totally expecting something more, um, inappropriate for younger audiences. ;) All in all, it’s a very relatable story.
Hehe.. Gotcha.. :-) Thanks for reading.
heh cute (:
Thanks.. :-)
Ha ha! Six months is a long time either way. :-) Thanks for linking up!
Hehe .. True that.. :-) Thanks for reading and the awesome word that took my mind in this direction!
B I T C H
Beautiful
Intelligent
Talented
Charming
Horny
:)~
Hehe.. :-)
That was hilarious. In 175 words you managed to make my day. I love this :-)
Am glad to hear that. Thanks for dropping by and reading. :-)